Last time, we explored what goes into creating layered characters. One example I gave for the types of elements we layer into our stories was conflicting character goals:
- conflicting character goals, maybe one a conscious desire and one a subconscious longing that makes it harder for them to make progress
In other words, just as our characters can have inner and outer layers, the same applies to their goals, needs, and longings. Those goals can give them internal and external arcs.
That example led Karen to ask in the comments:
“Your point about having external needs and internal needs that might be conflicting is so interesting. Would the following be a good example? External desire – to be in a loving relationship. Internal desire – does not feel worthy of love. So, a character might be in a loving relationship, but pushes away the lover thus killing the relationship because they do not feel they deserve that love.”
Those two things—”to be in a loving relationship” and “does not feel worthy of love”—would definitely be in conflict. But “does not feel worthy of love” is more of a false belief than a need/desire.
However, that’s a great question from Karen, so let’s take a closer look: What do we mean by conflicting goals—and how do false beliefs play a role?
Recap: Character Arcs and False Beliefs
Let’s start first by defining some of these terms…
What Are External and Internal Character Arcs?
Stories are about change, and arcs are the path of change from the beginning of a story to the end. Character arcs focus on the change that happens to characters external or internally:
- External Character Arc: What the character will accomplish by the end of the story.
This accomplishment has a visible goal that’s often in line with the plot arc. “To win,” “to escape,” and “to stop” are common outer journeys, and the visible goal might be winning the courtroom case, escaping the kidnapper, or stopping the terrorist.
- Internal Character Arc: How the character will transform by the end of the story.
Typically, a character will start out by living in fear in some way, and if they succeed, they’ll end by living courageously. The invisible finish line to this journey would be that they’d meet a deep longing or need (that they might not even be consciously aware of).
What Are False Beliefs?
The four main elements of a character’s emotional (internal) arc are:
- Longing or Need: What the character longs for or needs (inner goal).
- Wound: A past hurt that’s a current unhealed source of pain (backstory).
- False Belief: What the character falsely believes, often due to the wound (character’s worldview).
- Fear: What terrifies the character, often a fear of experiencing the wound’s pain again (stakes).
As I’ve explained before about how to show a character’s false beliefs, these false beliefs are things the characters believe that we, as the author, know not to be true. They’re not really unlovable, a loser, unworthy, deserving of their pain, etc.
However, their Wound makes them believe so, and more importantly, it makes them think they’ve reached this conclusion logically. They don’t think they’re being delusional.
How Do False Beliefs Fit into Characters’ Internal Arcs?
A character’s internal journey—their emotional arc—is the path of change we can see in a character’s thoughts, beliefs, behaviors, etc.
On a simplistic level, this insight into characters might look like:
- Character wants to be loved (Deep Longing or Need),
- but they were abused by their parent (Wound).
- Now, it’s easier to think they don’t deserve to be loved (False Belief)
- and push others away than to risk having that Belief proven true by allowing anyone close (Fear).
Over the course of the story, characters move two steps forward and one step back in their journey to overcome their False Belief and Fear. By the story’s climax, a plot event that would normally trigger a character’s False Belief doesn’t, and furthermore, the character rejects their former belief, often stating for the sake of the theme or the antagonist that they now know it not to be true.
Ta-da! The reader sees the character change and the emotional arc is complete. *smile*
Character Goals in Conflict: External vs. Internal
Now, what does all that have to do with conflicting goals?
The desire Karen mentioned for her character—to be in a loving relationship—could be an external goal if the character is taking tangible actions to make it happen (i.e., stuff that other characters would see). For example, they could ask their friends to set them up with others.
In other words, the external goal—and thus the journey to reach that goal—is often related to direct, tangible, visible, plot-related actions taken by the character.
So if we’re not sure what our character’s external goal is, take a look at the plot first: What are they trying to accomplish on a conscious level?
However, a character’s desire to be in a loving relationship like Karen mentioned is more often an internal goal, as it’s usually more subconscious than something a character actively pursues. That differentiation in characters’ awareness of their goals is why I like to use the word longing when talking about internal goals.
What's the difference between internal and external goals? Click To TweetAt the beginning of the story, characters can be broken or stuck in some way. The internal goal—and the journey to reach that goal—grows out of their deep (often, so deep as to be subconscious) unmet needs, desires, or longings that they’ve been ignoring.
If we’re not sure what our character’s internal goal is, take a look at how they’ll internally change by the end of the story: What do they learn is important to them? What are they willing to sacrifice for? These needs can be generic: love, survival, safety, justice, protection, etc.
Putting External and Internal Goals into Conflict
Creating conflicting goals means that we’re setting up their internal and external goals in such a way that our characters can’t easily reach both. This creates internal conflict, as they struggle to prioritize, and can lead to external conflict as well.
For example, goals in opposition would be like:
- Their pursuit of their external goal forces them to face characters and plot events that trigger and reiterate their false belief, complicating their internal arc.
- Their subconscious, internal goal (or false belief) leads them to self-sabotaging behaviors preventing their progress toward their external goals.
For Karen’s story, a need like “to be appreciated” or “to learn to trust again” wouldn’t be in conflict with the need she mentioned “to be in a loving relationship.” Those needs often work together.
But let’s see how we could add a conflicting goal to that situation:
- If “to be in a loving relationship” was an external goal, with the character consciously taking action to pursue that goal, then a conflicting internal goal could be something like “to be independent or prove I don’t need anyone else.”
- If “to be in a loving relationship” was an internal goal, a conflicting external goal could be something like “to get that promotion my love interest is also up for.”
How can giving our characters conflicting goals help our story? Click To TweetAll this said, if we can’t break our character down to internal and external goals, we can simply set up any two conflicting goals: What two needs does the character have that they can’t decide between? Focusing on internal and external goals is often easier—just because we should already have both types of goals for strong, well-developed characters—but sometimes we might find other goals (like two external or two internal) in opposition instead.
However we decide to add opposing goals, we can see how pursuing the goals might strengthen the false belief or prompt self-sabotaging behaviors or cause other problems, making success harder or at least questionable. That’s conflict—and in storytelling, conflict is good. *smile*
Does the difference between internal and external arcs and goals make sense? Do you write your characters with conflicting goals? If not, does this give you ideas for how to add them? If yes, do conflicting goals help increase the conflict in your story? Do you have any questions about goals, arcs, or false beliefs?Pin It